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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2002-12-12 12:17 PM



with you


a lifting fog,
a drifting bog,
a soggy log,
a dirty dog ...
... and I wonder if I'll ever amount to much?

a morning dew,
a glowing hue,
a stewing brew,
a squeaking shoe ...
... and if it's not me ... it must be you,
if I'll ever get ahead.

a peaceful hush,
a cheeky blush,
a crushing slush,
a gushing flush ...
... and all of my insecurities and anxieties
go rushing down the drain
while I walk this morning's walk
with you.


-Lighthouse Bob

© Copyright 2002 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-12-12 03:08 PM


I love this Bob.  Merry Christmas if I don't get back.  It's a busy time for me.  Love, Joyce
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-12 03:26 PM


Sounds like a walk like that is just what a doctor would order!

Enjoyed the wit and whimsy of this poem!

Earth Angel

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3 posted 2002-12-13 12:25 PM


Bob:  Clever and entertaining!  I enjoyed the read.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-12-13 12:43 PM




(smiles) Oh Robert, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love walking and may you always find peace and light through His guiding warmth! (big hugggssssss) Yay, I love this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-12-13 10:59 PM


"... and if it's not me ... it must be you,
if I'll ever get ahead."

I love this line so much, along with the rest of the poem. It is so true... we can only advance through walking with Christ.

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

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