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Poet4Christ
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0 posted 2004-10-11 11:51 PM


(Untitled)

You, the remaining left to struggle through your terrestrial rights
fathom my deliverance and withdraw your long dark faces
As you blunder forward through your relentless lying sight
listen for my soul’s soft whispers within our father’s traces

And observe this day of passage, the genesis of my forever
Forsake your unsettled thoughts and your idle tears of mourning
Recover my smile from between the stars of sparkling evening weather
and hold my ghost in sight of the brother brown hawk soaring

For the beloved siblings blessed within their advancements just before
shall parade the dance of redeeming laughs upon my barren grave
We shall uplift our voice in the songs of communion well restored
as we exalt the forgiveness of my past with rejoicing fruitful praise

A host of unknown old friends shall come to salute and guide
the winged paladins, the patron protectors of my wandering nights
We shall converse and excel upon an enlightening upward ride
upward beyond all space and time, toward the welcoming warm lights

And when this soul is advanced before the illuminations of his presence
upon my face I shall fall and trust upon the good judgments I deserve
I shall praise him for his love, raise my hands and comprehend his essence
cast aside old remnants of my skin and offer up this soul to serve

Though concerning you, the remaining left to ponder my great passing
I long for your deliverance, to softly whisper down upon your ears
This soul is going home to wash within his glorious love so everlasting
and one day through his son I pray you shall come to worship with me here


Timothy Work  2004




He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

[This message has been edited by Poet4Christ (10-12-2004 11:18 AM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-10-16 06:18 PM


A sincerelly loving poem.  I am sorry Tim, I stayed away from this corner and didn't realise you had posted.  Welcome back.  Love, joyce
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