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Shivering Flowers |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Shivering Flowers Heedless fingers weave around the sword And a spattered night time star Vermilion steps, ricochet off antenna warriors With plates of armor in their hands, drooling pincers Begging for generic words…something immortal? Iron masks look through a print design Incorporating fickle hearts of men Tigers eat the weak, while nature’s softer appearance Plays a single flute…providing golden wings In the first dreams of lovers and the concentrating poet Elixir is saving the fox from hunters Search for me in that moonlit haze I am that Fox gripping The unexpected heaving forms of Unwanted ambiguity of amplified doors Panting like breath short Violated dreams sailing nomadic Or’rwaves, composed of six full moons Where fall slips into outer shells, and flowers shiver Churning awareness, cold-blue Running with end sounds, that grasp my hand Trying to shake loose this mesmerizing chokehold It behooves me That where I shall go….tomorrow To the autumn rice fields Where a draw bridge gathers cicada shells |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I'll have to admit that I can't fully understand this. But I love it anyway. Your descriptions leave brilliant, vibrant pictures in my view. Beautiful... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Rottiestyl Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60Illinois, USA |
Such a beautiful piece. The title itself just reels me in. Captivatiing work of art. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Wow! Your vocabulary usage is astounding. I read and reread with joy. Rae |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A beautiful tapestry of vivid words. joyce |
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