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Poet4Christ
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0 posted 2004-08-15 11:32 PM


Little Painter

Grandma, little painter
there is so much I need to say
as I slip through hindsight clouds
and remember childhood days
How you embraced our common spirit
the love for aesthetic sight and art
How I knew the width and depth of love
you held for me inside your heart
I remember the most genuine of smiles
and your fragile tender hands
I remember your beautiful works of oil
you gave as gifts to all your friends

Grandma, giving teacher
please remit my ignorant youth
for I failed to grasp our good connection
I failed us within the clear sights of truth
We could and should have been so close
I curse my complacent absent-minded heart
for failing to understand your worth
for failing to share our hearts of art
I should have made the effort
to soak up everything you craved to give
to hold you and make your last years rich
to study your giving ways and how to live

Grandma, blessed angel
my heart reaches up to you in desperate cries
O Grandma paint me some forgiveness
and brush away regret from my weeping eyes
I pray you can look down
and feel me giving you all the hugs you missed
as I search for you beyond the stars
where your tender soul resides within eternal bliss
Grandma, I can’t wait to see you
one day when both our times have passed
May we sit and paint our new communion
as we share our hearts of art at last


Timothy Work 2004

This poem is very personal and I almost didn't want to share it.  I can only hope that someone out there understands how I was feeling when I wrote it and will enjoy the write.

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

© Copyright 2004 Timothy Work - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-22 03:15 PM


Dearest Tim,  You certainly hit the right chord with me.  I know your grandma knows and understands.  It is ever thus.  We don't know the worth of some of our blessings until they are gone.  I like your Grandma am passing on my thoughts in poetry, rather than painting as she did and I know some day they will be cherished.  I have not been back for a few days as I have some heavy projects going, so I hadn't found this until now.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2004-08-23 04:39 PM


It being so personal all the more reason to read with respect and reverence. Nicely done.
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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2004-08-23 10:25 PM


Timothy:  I do understand your feelings. I know I didn't appreciate my grandmother the way I should have either.  She was a poet and wanted me to be one also and I didn't take the time to learn from her, what I am now trying to capture!

Betty Lou

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Poet4Christ
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4 posted 2004-08-24 01:28 PM


Joyce - thank you.  It is great to hear from you and I am looking forward to becoming a regular once again.  As I grow older, I am realizing how important all relationships are - family and friends.  Thanks again - Tim

Msflame - thank you for your compliment, I tend to find that the poetry I write derived solely from emotion always tend to flow form my mind so much easier.  This one was no exception.  God Bless - Tim

Betty - Sounds like you understand exactly where I am coming from.  I suppose this subject will always break my heart - until they day we final meet again, which I know we will.  - Tim

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

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