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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-27 02:14 PM



It's the slight, slit of space
between branch of tree,
where light shines through
in shades of real,
in hues of blue surreal.

It's in this space I feel,
the alight of gentle spirit
upon air that floats on edge,
of tangible and non.
The softest land upon
outstretched hand,

that reaches toward the heavens
awaiting blessings to rain down.


WhiteRose 10/27/02


"my reflection becomes me"

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-27-2002 02:15 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-27 03:39 PM


I love it Anne.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-10-30 04:18 PM


This is surrealism par excellence!
What an imagination you have girl!
Enjoyed!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-30 04:23 PM




Yay!!! Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! (smiles) I wish for these blessings to come falling down to you like pearls and flood your golden heart, sweet friend, thgis is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-10-30 04:34 PM


Julie, thank you dear friend for your comments.

Radrook, thanks so much. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-10-30 04:35 PM


Noah, you snuck in there when I wasn't looking. Thank you for always reading and responding.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-30-2002 04:35 PM).]

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