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To Share With You
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To Share With You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“TO SHARE WITH YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ In shadows of candlelight soft, in moonbeams of light during the darkness, in the meadow kissed by the rain, in a forest with the leaves caressed by a summer’s breeze I would hold you close, whisper words of enchantment in your ear, share with you my thoughts, my desires for you… ~~~~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very nice Bill. Was the torch shape intended?  J |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and my all your desires be fulfilled with true love! (big hugggsssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is so sweet and romantic. And you know that I love all these romantic poems, being the romantic I am. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. Love to All, Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
My dear man, how do you keep coming up with such beautifully romantic pieces that have all the women here at Passions, feeling passionate?  Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Lovesick_Proletariat Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 11 |
hm. yes romance. nice sentimental sentiment. you have an excellent start here, Bill. good work. if you really want constructive critique...i have to say its not exactly my favorite poem....but...yeah...its not...bad.... have a nice day..... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Jamie - Yes, the torch shape was intended. Thanks for stopping by... Mistletoe Angel - your replies to my poems are always touching. Thank you Noah... garysgirl - yes, I see from your writings that you are a romantic. I love being one... NewEnglandlazurlu - Now that's a very good question. H'mmmm, I wonder.... Lovesick_Proletariat - I must thank you for stopping by my place. And thanks for the critique, perhaps the next one will be one of your favorites... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well, Bill, it is my favorite poem, I love it...Mmmmmmmm... Warmly, Regards2You (Pat) ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Oh yes, this is very real and lovely. Best wishes. etoodog |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bill...quite enchanting! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Another riveting write Bill...how well the torch symbolizes the content of the work... Very well done. ThisDiamond |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Sweet words of love touch me. Thank you SG |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
regards2you - thank you for your kindness.. Robert Adamson - from the heart come the words, thank you... Enchantress - enchanting it is, your thoughts are always welcome... [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (10-26-2002 10:27 PM).] |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Bill Charles../\..yes, loving and lyric; thanks, enjoyed reading../\..Spiros --------------trees------- |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is extremely beautiful and full of such lovely romantic thoughts, such lovely romantic dreams. I always enjoy your poetry; but this one speaks to the mood I'm in tonight. ***Ivy Rose |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is one of my favorites, Bill... I think its even shaped like a flame... Romantically lovely  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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