»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #23
»
Many Goodbyes, and a hello
| Open Poetry #23 |
|
Many Goodbyes, and a hello |
|
|
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
|
goodbyes when do you say them? before or after you go? When you say hello its right away So I guess right away is when goodbye should be said I really am not ready to go its so far away but it seems I'll miss it here Once the time comes I hope I live till I am 100 So I can make sure I leave behind no one Goodbyes could be happy Lets let each passing end happily Lets not say goodbye ------This poem is about not wanting to say goodbye when the time comes for me to die 100 years from now( at least 60).------ |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I agree that you should never say goodbye, because you never really know what's in store. Nice thoughts here. |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kellie, you wrote this poem very well. I liked it very much. You had a lot of good thoughts. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Love To All, Ethel |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kellie - I found at times there are no goodbyes.. Nice write... BC |
||
|
Genuine_Canadian_Man Junior Member
since 2002-10-07
Posts 11Timmins, Ontario, Canada |
That's an awesome poem. There are, although not known, times when we have to say goodbye without warning, at young ages. Your poem opens my mind and shows that no one should have to say goodbye to the world, someone, or something and a tender young age. Keep up the talented writting sweet friend. With Love and serenity, |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
