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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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You keep trying to keep in touch with The loved one you fought with But everytime you E-mail them It says the addy doesn't exsist You write him a letter But it just gets sent Right back saying, "Nobody by that name lives here." Then you try calling him But it keeps saying The number is disconnected So you know The love of your life is gone because all you get Is a return to sender Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Bummer. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, I hope everything is going alright with you, sweet friend, I know that whole "If you'd like to make a call, please hang up and try again, if you need help, hang up and then re-dial your operator" mumbo-jumbo! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, hope all is going well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nothing aches more than trying to reach someone who fears the respond... Great strength to you Julie...ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, this is a beautiful poem, but so sad. I hope everything's better now. Thanks for sharing, sweet friend. Love To All, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't fret though, there's another one that will give you a key one day! |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Oh boy can I relate to that ... hits right in the heart, hits home. ... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sometimes for our own good we must cut the cords of longing. In doing so myself, I found that there really are more fish in the sea worth catching. Deb |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nothing is more painful than the feeling of loss and yearning. But his messages were very clear. You will find another who will send you roses instead of e-mails I could certainly relate Liz |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
RTS! I want more. Thank you, for giving me this delight. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - this is very good and I liked it a lot... BC |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This is very hard. To try to repair with communication shut off. I have learned the hard way that words once said can never be taken back. Best to you..  SimplyGold |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is the worst way to lost touch with someone... just disappearing like that... Sometimes, its better to just try to forget and go onto better and less painful things I hope things are better now... The poem is excellent  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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