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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-10-24 09:34 PM







Helium within?
Japanese lantern, perhaps?
Moonlight shines my way.


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-24 09:37 PM


Kari darling heart sister, you know there is within your words such beauty, and you shade it so delicately and deepen the connection to the heart so skilfully. Wonderful writing darling heart, absolutely wonderful, you know I utterly utterly love this. You write the refrain that sings in my soul, how do you do that? Whatever you do it so well


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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2 posted 2002-10-24 09:37 PM


And the moon is made up of green cheese and helium, except when it becomes a Japanese lantern...
Very beautiful, Karilea... I love the concept
~ hugs of admiration

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Martie
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3 posted 2002-10-24 09:42 PM


Karilea

Your moon is beautiful, more beautiful your words.

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4 posted 2002-10-24 09:52 PM


Inspired senyru....the moon tonight looks much like a Japanese lantern...sered yellow

...believe what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2002-10-24 09:52 PM


Karilea - lovely thoughts. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-10-24 09:56 PM


Looking into a
dark midnight river, Moon sees
no one but herself.

Beautiful Karilea...you do these so well!
~Hugs~

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7 posted 2002-10-24 10:12 PM


I have missed that smile.....

this is just lovely, lovely, lovely....this picture as well....strikes a certain mood...
hugggssss

Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

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8 posted 2002-10-24 10:12 PM


made of a la mode?
or creme de suzette supreme?
you decide, dear moon



(sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, Lady Luna is such an ancient mystery to us all and I guess only our Muse can decide what beauty the moon is made of! (big hugggssssss) This is magical, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-10-24 10:27 PM


What an unusual and unique perspective of Mother Moon! I really appreciate your artisty.

EA

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10 posted 2002-10-25 10:13 AM


hasn't it just been gorgeous...well done haiku!! or maybe senyru, love pic accompaniment.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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11 posted 2002-10-25 10:15 AM


Karilea, I loved seeing your moon...and your words. Thank you, sweet lady.


Love To All,
Ethel

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12 posted 2002-10-25 10:19 AM


Karilea,
Wonderful, enjoyed.

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13 posted 2002-10-25 10:56 AM


Karilea~
*sigh* .... so often lately I cannot see the graphics linked to the netpoets server ... not just yours ... mine too~
Wonder what's up with that ?
*BIG SIGHS*
I'll check back in ...~
You 'know' I love these 'moonies'~
*Huggers*
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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