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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2002-10-24 05:45 PM

T onight I'll write a poem for you
H ollow frazes here won't do
E ven if they're true

T ell the truth in acrostic way
R oll my pen on paper and play
U ntil the words make sense
T hen I'll send them overseas
H old'm tight and read them please

I n every line it's me you see
N ot real of course, my spirit will be

A crostic I did promise to do
C ould this be a verse for you
R est my case after few words more
O h your poetic thoughts I adore
S o I learned a lot you see
T his is what you gave to me
I nner feelings caught in a line
C aring friends I call you mine

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-24 06:03 PM

I love the way this was written. it is so cool

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-10-24 06:44 PM

T  itia

I  s

T  remendously

I  ngenious

A  bsolutely


E  arth
A  ngel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-24 07:46 PM

(sigh) Oh Titia, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I love it, your talents are multi-faceted and you always have such love and inspiration to share, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a ebautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-10-24 08:54 PM

Titia darling heart YOU are without doubt one of the most precious and treasured friends I have even made. This is so beautifully written that it makes my eyes go misty. I love it utterly utterly utterly and I wub you too. I’m missing You and wishing we were back in Port Richey in our cosy little villa.

I can see you sitting there eating ice cream and writing all those wonderful poems, truly you are someone very special and I send you warm hugs and much love.

Look after your knee

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy