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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-12 09:42 PM



Tonight..

it is soft of mandarin orange
upon skin. Scented sweet, with
hint of sandalwood, musky, full
upon body cleansed under spray
of water, hot, purifying,
luxurious of feel in shower.

With light bought, brought
ghastly was mom's reaction
this tiny reflecting , metal
sculpture for candle illuminate.
The perfect paint upon wall of shadow
and light through bead of shade.

Spray of powder to silk of smooth
now to soothe, cool the hot, yet not,
as surround with scent too many
aromatic escape..in words of poetry.

WhiteRose

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Gemini
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1 posted 2002-10-12 10:18 PM


I liked this one, very vivid detailing of scents.  Nicely penned.
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-13 09:29 AM


Sounds like my shower routine, but as usual, you write of my thoughts and experiences better than I could myself! Amazing!

EA

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3 posted 2002-10-13 04:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it is amazing how we can always conjire such perfumes and essences in poetry, yours always spells myriads of them, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-10-13 09:25 PM


I like to make my shower routine a sensory experience. Elegance in the mood and feel. Thank you all for commenting.
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5 posted 2002-10-16 10:57 PM


Anne, this is beautiful. Another one of the gems I missed when I was gone this past weekend. thanks for sharing

Love To All,
Ethel

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