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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-23 10:00 PM


“PATTERNS FALLING
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Cool air touched
upon my face with
the taste of you, it
traveled over miles
to sprinkle with
mystical patterns,
falling in silent
softness,
and one
kissed on lips soft…

My breath flowed
in whispers, my
heart beat faster,
for when the pattern
rested upon you
it was I…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-23 10:03 PM


Wonderful write Bill...
Especially enjoyed the last stanza.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2002-10-23 10:28 PM




(sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you always weave loving patterns with your words, may they always make up a tapestry of rainbows for your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-10-23 10:34 PM


You weave your words so nice Bill~

I liked this very much~

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