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Open Poetry #23

Fall: Night and Day

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-10-12 09:07 PM

Fall: Night and Day

Fall
~***~~***~
Night

An awning shelter
Twinkles aloft placidly
O'er cinnamon leaves
Bashful towards calm puffs whisking
A graceful, sincere downfall
..:~~~~:..

Fall
~***~~***~
Day

cornucopia
tapestries of red and gold
leaves hang glide
making sport of wind gusts
a colorful carnival
..:~~~~:..

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-12 09:07 PM

Beautiful Cher

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-12 09:29 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, your poetry is always a cornucopia of colors and songs, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-12 09:39 PM

A lovely. Tanka.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-10-12 09:45 PM

For a lady from paradise west, you know an
awful lot about seasons of the year...OR,
you are a pretty creative poetess...

What if I told you, you were both????

Excellent job Cher..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-10-12 10:04 PM

CSKpoet - wonders from the islands, excellent write...

BC

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-10-13 10:19 PM

I enjoyed both of these.
You do these so well.

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-10-13 10:21 PM

Cheryl I love this poem. Your work is so beautiful Thanks.

Ethel....garysgirl

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