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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-10-23 12:11 PM


Her breasts now round and sumptuous,
A figure that's adorned,
She's worked on this continuously,
Before was only scorned.

Hair like silver strands of silk,
A complexion like a baby's,
Legs like that on Betty Grable,
One very gorgeous lady.

She's worked and saved and done without,
To get her body in this shape,
Now she's pursued by Balladeer,
Her looks are simply great.

Though it took so many years,
She's never been regretful,
Congratulations LARRY C,
Your surgery was successful.

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-23 12:16 PM


LMAO this is too funny Larry.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2002-10-23 12:30 PM


(chuckling) Well now, I thought he looked different..too bad the surgery didn't get that stray hair off his face. Had it done that then indeed he might be a likely date for deer...

suthern
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3 posted 2002-10-23 12:44 PM


I thought I recognized that smile!!! LOL But he may have to go through all that pain and misery once again... reversing the surgery is better than pursuit by Bal! LOL

This is great, Toe... I enjoyed! *S*

By the way, Larry... it's not fair that you're purtier than I am! LOL What's the name of that surgeon? *G*


garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-23 01:03 PM


HE'S    BAACCKKKKKKK!!!   Thank you, dear friend for your delightful write. As with any poem (or reply) I read of yours, I love it. Thanks.
Larry, dear sweet friend, wasn't that painful?!? HaHa!!

Love To All,
Ethel

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-10-23 01:43 PM


ROTFLMBO   

Soleil Noir
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6 posted 2002-10-23 01:46 PM



Let's see, Toe, good Sir...
I do recall this bitty poem
rendering other bodies of poetic nature...
I hereby declare
that it be fit for any poet
that takes on the likes of you...

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