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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-10-23 07:43 AM


Taking aim,
There a chance of he’s insane,
It’s a game;
He’s playing
Like a video slaying
They’re saying,
Possibly,
He can’t grasp reality,
But T.V.
Is so real
We all know it’s life he’ll steal
And not feel.
There’s a chance that he’s to blame.

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2002-10-23 07:49 AM


there comes a time
beyond the rhyme
and know I know
that I play god
to thus decide
one man's decree--

today?
I'd gladly take that chance.

(smile..guess who ain't sleeping now?)

Professor Gloom
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Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2002-10-23 08:01 AM


Thank you, serenity blaze,
playing God is not for a man,
best humanity can do is a jury.
This is just a poem about a coward
that roams nearby, hardly even a man.

Pleased you enjoyed,
hope you sleep soon with pleasant dreams.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-10-23 09:05 AM


sighing...how one man/woman cannot be detected and caught is beyond me...

make sure you only pass and don't open yourself up to being one of the next...

As Always,
Me

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-10-23 09:13 AM


Professor  
Clever write, no answers.

Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2002-10-23 09:34 AM


Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Actually it isn’t hard to do, it’s surprising that it hasn’t been done before
It just takes a different type of personality than the Normal American.
The history of the sniper is long, but usually it a nationalistic motive.

Thank you, Seymour Tabin
For taking the time to read and respond,
And I’m not sure there are any answers

Gloom

baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
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Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
6 posted 2002-10-24 11:19 AM


Don't worry please it will end soon i am sure of it. I just feel it.  He'll be caught, then he'll answer.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2002-10-24 11:26 AM



I do believe, Justice shall now
be served up...

but an impartial, unbiased jury?  

I doubt that will be so easy.

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