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~K
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 104


0 posted 2002-10-23 01:42 AM



Devastating eyes
lacerating
hand me downs
curved like
the scimitar &
taking no
prisoners
still I
surrendered
added my
fan
to the flame
scathed by
my ignorance
& delight
in gorgeous things
that even
after all this
time
logic fails
to understand
The hope
for all my kind
rests
in our own
hands

© Copyright 2002 ~K - All Rights Reserved
FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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1 posted 2002-10-23 01:44 AM


as for orginal comments go..sorry can't help you there..I should go to bed soon but thought provoking, yes..enjoyed yes! and look forward to more? definately yes

Consider yourself fuzzed

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-10-23 05:43 AM


Enjoyed...James
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-23 08:12 AM




(sigh) Yes, it is all up to us but know there is always a guiding light of faith above you that will never dwindle! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-23 08:42 AM


yes..I enjoyed and it yes it made me think...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-10-23 08:44 AM


Well said K~
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-23 10:24 AM


"The hope
for all my kind
rests
in our own
hands"

---Yes, 'twas thus and ever more!

Earth Angel

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