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scorpio
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0 posted 2002-10-22 05:38 PM



Come with Me

Come with me to the water's edge
And there our love we'll pledge.
Walk with me along the shore
And I shall look into eyes I adore.
And as the day goes dark
You'll on my heart leave your mark.
Under the fullness of the moon
Love and passion will us consume.

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-22 05:44 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and together may your love take your hand and stare at that sunset over the water and forever feel joy beside your love! (big hugggsssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

secretlife
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2 posted 2002-10-22 05:58 PM


So romantice poems from romantice person.
It is very nice.. I love your words..
Nice feelings too..

Hugess


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-10-22 06:12 PM


A very beautiful love poem, Scorpio
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Magicmystery
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4 posted 2002-10-22 06:54 PM


Very nicely done.... well said!!!!

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.  
But above all... be kind to yourself today.
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brian madden
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5 posted 2002-10-22 06:58 PM


enjoyed the read, beautiful write.

The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-10-22 07:26 PM


Scorpio~What a lovely declaration of your love!

May you always gaze into those eyes that you adore..
Gently take her hand, and walk the shores of evermore.

~Hugs & Sighs, Nancy Lee~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2002-10-22 07:54 PM


beautiful images entwining nature and love.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-10-22 09:51 PM




*Forgot to tuck this one into my library*

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-10-22 09:57 PM


Scorpio ~

Are you a scorpio astrologically? That is a very passionate sign!

If you are, your loving and passionate nature is spilling into your wonderfully sensuous poetry!

EA

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-10-22 10:41 PM


scorpio - nice, short with meaning. Good write...

BC

Gemini
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11 posted 2002-10-22 11:49 PM


Scorpio, nicely penned.  I'm married to a Scorpio male and though he is capable of some acts of kindness, I know exactly what they mean by their "sting".
scorpio
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12 posted 2002-10-23 08:00 AM


Thank you for your comments...I appreciate your support very much...again thank you...

...believe what your heart feels...

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