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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2002-10-22 12:19 PM


reverently, the winsome wish enveloped
the shortcomings, once pronounced-
a whirlwind promise amalgamated with the
kissing lips of heavenly roses
and wave upon wave of quietude engrossed
with twinkles; heartily harpooned
by Mercy, Herself, for added supremacy...

yes, eyes will open to a calm sublime;
there will not be any need
for explanation

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..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros


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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-10-22 12:54 PM


fascinating!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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2 posted 2002-10-22 01:01 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, you have made the catch of the day, sweet friend, you always harpoon such delightful thoughts from the ocean of inspiration to us all, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Surreal
Junior Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 35
Paris
3 posted 2002-10-22 01:21 PM


Beautiful poem, "kissing lips of heavenly roses", what a wonderful line.

I remember you from another board I posted on actually, the arcanumcafe.com one to be precise.  

Good to see a familar name

Glory is a silent thing-- Mineral

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
4 posted 2002-10-22 01:49 PM


..VAS../\..Mistletoe Angel../\.. + Surreal

../\..i'm grateful for the comments; thanks for reading....Surreal, yes; your name, too,
rings a familiar bell; thanks../\..Spiros


----------smiles------------

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2002-10-22 03:51 PM


beautifully written piece, enjoyed.

The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
6 posted 2002-10-22 06:04 PM


..brian madden../\..thanks for reading..


../\..Spiros

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