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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2002-10-21 04:52 AM


reaching for her smile,
he almost rose from the ground
"look at this man, in love,"
a passing sparrow sang
"he just grazed my feathers"

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..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros

© Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-10-21 06:51 AM



I came in for the title's name,
walked away with a whole other thought...
enjoyed this, Spiros.  You're adding a
new dimension to our pages...

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2002-10-21 07:50 AM


..Sunshine../\..thank you for reading; i'm

grateful../\..Spiros


----------------calm seas--------

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-21 08:08 AM


Spiros? I'm grateful too Thanks for allowing us to read you


Maree

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4 posted 2002-10-21 08:13 AM




Yay! Awwwwwwww, this sung with such beauty, sweet friend, I can hear the sparrow singing through these words in the reply of a lover, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-10-21 10:54 AM


You are definitely into the spirit of writing!

Both you and Ram display a stroke of poetic genious!

Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-21-2002 10:54 AM).]

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2002-10-21 10:55 AM


nice work... I enjoyed
Spiros Zafiris
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7 posted 2002-10-21 12:04 PM


Dark Angel../\..Mistletoe Angel../\..
Earth Angel../\.. + Cpat Hair../\..


..thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; your kind words make me
smile..

../\..Spiros

----------------mountains------------

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