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it's okay, i'm with the band...
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it's okay, i'm with the band... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Just slap that pass upon my thigh cause I don't wanna hang out here sitting on a trunk, bummed out-- reflected in those red footlights. I don't believe my face can do those contortions--so required standard mask of the groupie to decorate the wing stage right. I want to be out there again-- I like anonynimity-- I want to meet the paying guests and dance the jubilee. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-12-2002 12:34 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You can only dance the song if you take me right along and we shall whirl in jubilee to dance the dance of song in wheeee! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
girlie...youre not just with the band... you are their harmony   |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yeah but it's Paul McCartney no WE need you out here with us dancin JET! dee doo doo dee doo doo dee doo b |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I want to be out there again-- I like anonynimity-- Yeah, whatever!  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Karen... I think you are the lead singer... not just a part of the band... This poem intrigues me... I love it Lyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
No JET---but lotsa nice surprises-- Let's see... He opened without an opening song...pageantry of sorts-- actors portrayed characters throughout place and time, spanning every century, but I did notice the present oddly(?) absent. Troubadour--geisha--samurai---all came down through the audience, mixing with the crowd but alight in spot---with a huge backdrop of parthenon across the stage. Very surreal venetian type mardi gras. Then he the backdrop faded to a silhouette of him standing with guitar, as he rose in mid stage---and echoing that performance of time? He opened with Beatles and flew to Wings to Solo and back again. The sound was perfection. And he looked great in red. smile...one of the best shows I have seen....ever--and I've seen a few. I would have happily planted me butt on a trunk...and the worship would have been real...only one thing was missing---sigh?  to you-- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity~ I'm with JM. You're not 'with' the band. YOU are the reason 'the band plays on'.  Hugs, you.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I agree with all of the above... Now come on...sing and dance for us... and watch out for those dang footlights! Excellent write! ~hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity And I agree. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karen, the best action is down in the mosh pit. This one..well.. rocked. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I always like to read your poetry. Whatever you write about makes me feel just like I'm there. thanks for sharing your poem. Love To All, Ethel |
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