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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-10-19 03:16 PM





Summer's fire gone.....
September's cool hand
lightly touching my heart.
So glad to be alive
in all this color,
all this Autumn beauty.
Leaves dancing above my head
swirling hands of yellow,
orange and reddish-brown
waving gently at my passing.
A new beauty arising
out of Summer's warmth,
arising in my soul.
Autumn foliage
spectacular to my view,
my soul's bright, new foliage
spectacular to His Discerning Eye.





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1 posted 2002-10-19 03:24 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I love the fall foliage because the colors are so breathtaking and so surreal just like a Vang Gogh painting always! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-19 03:28 PM


Ivy this is such a peaceful read and a delightful setting that you have allowed us to see through your eyes.  Very well done.  

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-19 03:52 PM


You have used a colorful palette of words to paint this magestic picture of autumnal beauty.

You are a very talented artist!

Earth Angel

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