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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-18 07:52 PM



I want what is now
what is to come
the total sum.

All the edges
fitting together
picture finished
of sunny weather.

The puzzle complete
defined, beautiful.

WhiteRose

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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THE ORIGINAL !!!!
1 posted 2002-10-18 08:46 PM


Oh, don't we all !!!!   I have been waiting for it all to 'come together' for about 65 years now, hope that you don't have to wait that long !!!!
Kind thoughts
John

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WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-10-18 08:51 PM


I hope so too John. Sure would be nice if it would come together before I'm too old to understand the finished picture.

Thanks for reading and responding.

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3 posted 2002-10-18 09:13 PM




(sigh) Oh Anne, I understand how you feel, sweet friend, while I am eager to be suprised by lifes beauties it would be nice to at least get parts of it everyday along the way and know where this may be going! (kiss on cheek) This shines with thought, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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