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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-18 11:06 AM


From daisies to roses
that's what it says
upon the silver gifted
with all the rest,

of the treasures he brings
placing them just so.
I want the gift of love
this he doesn't know.

For I don't see it among
the trinkets on the shelf,
yet this is what I need
this, and nothing else.

WhiteRose 10/18/02


"my reflection becomes me"

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-18-2002 11:06 AM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-18 11:08 AM


Beautiful as usual Anne

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-18 11:09 AM


ah.... it is not the words but the feeling. Not the acts but the meaning....

enjoyed..

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-10-18 11:17 AM


Nicely done Rosie....in my case however...it's from dandelion to crab grass....
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4 posted 2002-10-18 11:27 AM


This is precious    Wonder why it is so much harder for men to express themselves. Except the poets in here, of course. They don't miss a beat!

I liked this a great deal, you have captured what many experience.

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-10-18 11:40 AM


How very true... and beautifully expressed! *S*
WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-10-18 08:07 PM


Thanks for reading Julie.

Cpat, glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and responding.

Toe, thanks hon, and I don't believe it for a minute. You are a dozen long stemmed roses kind of guy if I ever saw one.

Thank you Pat, I'm not sure why it is this way for some people. Instead of just a simple gesture of love, they feel things are what is needed to show or express their feelings. Thanks for reading.

Thanks suthern, your comments are appreciated. Glad you enjoyed.



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7 posted 2002-10-19 06:58 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, I know just how you feel, all I want for Christmas is for Joanna to be close and we can talk and tell each other how we love each other so, that is all I need and want until we have each others hand! (sigh) All you need is love, God Bless You, I wish this love to always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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