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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-10-17 10:30 PM


If Only Tomorrow
~ By Sue ~

I try so hard just to hang on
Even when things get way too rough
Sometimes my thoughts start to wonder
Thinking life is just too tough

People talk about love
Like it is something real
I know what is in my heart
And I know what I feel

The emotions I feel inside
Are so very confusing
Sometimes I feel love
Sometimes I feel nothing

I am so tired from worry
It is a struggle to get going
I would rather stay in bed
Than to waste time trying

It seems there is always something
That gets in my way
If only tomorrow
Could be a better day

10-17-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-17 10:41 PM


Sue, I really like the thoughts you put in this poem. Very good.
Love to All,
Ethel

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2 posted 2002-10-17 11:12 PM


you gotta keep on trying, tomorrow can be a better day but life is what you make it...remember that, it's true.
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3 posted 2002-10-17 11:52 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, I know this feeling and these last few days I've felt the love has gone yet I reflect on the words she said before and believe there is still faith and I just go on remianing optimistic while fighting the tears! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, my thoughts go out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-17 11:56 PM


Sue,
Enough tomorrows and it will happen. You gotta have hope! Courage girl I know it is hard. And peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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5 posted 2002-10-18 02:08 AM


Reality bites, huh?
I enjoyed the read, but not the knowledge that it was written with the pen of sadness.
Peaceful dreams, Sue.

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6 posted 2002-10-18 09:09 AM


Oh Sue, how often during the day I think of you and pray for you. Hang in there and take it one day at a time. Maybe even 1/2 a day at a time.

We're all pulling for you.  Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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7 posted 2002-10-18 09:39 AM


SmartChick
A good write with a sad thought.

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