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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-12-11 11:45 PM



May those who cast
Our love aside,
Taste the bitter fruit of
Our wounded wake,
Which grows fierce as
Passing Years contrive,
And dismal creatures
Of us make.

May peace be granted to her heart.
May love embrace her for her sake.
This prayer now be heeded far,
And a content person of her make.

There is a soul within her song.
May angels comfort her this night,
And guard her while she sleeps so calm.
May angels tell her it’s alright.

Fly along, my angels, fly along.

Heal the heart of whom I love,
Faithful one from unseen world.
Oh! tell her, sweet seraph,
Oh! bringer of joy and love and peace
Oh! tell her what she means to me.
Let her see her wings unfurl,
In all untamed entirety.

I dream along, I dream tonight,
I dream in shades of gray.
In color and in feelings strong
tommorow
Is another day.

I live along, I live and live,
With every passing sun and moon,
I breath my heart It beats I breathe,
Awaited dreams will arrive soon.

Soon come now, revelation lost,
And dance with me so long.
forever for eternity unbound and going strong!

Things are not as they seem, moonbeam
Soon come, I say, soon come.

Sweetness follows.. Ye are Gods.
Thou shall see when all is done.

I tell you now, my dear beloved,
To whom I’ve always been so kind.
I may not remember where we came from…
But I cannot leave that love behind.

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

© Copyright 2002 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-12-11 11:59 PM


I live along, I live and live,
With every passing sun and moon,
I breath my heart It beats I breathe,
Awaited dreams will arrive soon.

Soon come now, revelation lost,
And dance with me so long.
forever for eternity unbound and going strong!

Things are not as they seem, moonbeam
Soon come, I say, soon come.

Sweetness follows.. Ye are Gods.
Thou shall see when all is done.

I tell you now, my dear beloved,
To whom I’ve always been so kind.
I may not remember where we came from…
But I cannot leave that love behind.

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OH MY!!!!
this is SO beautiful...
reads like a gospel sung prayer or a lullabye....
what a lovely inspire this is...
very very cool Poet sir...
I just love that closing verse...the last couplet is rhymes divine.
Well done!!

just one line ... one rhyme ... one metered verse ...
if only I could inspire in you ... promised poetic coerce.

fishop
Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79
ohio
2 posted 2002-12-12 12:26 PM


I too enjoyed this.  You have much talent mr. scorpion.  I think you may want to tell her how you feel, you can't go wrong if you use words like these.  
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2002-12-12 01:46 AM


definate beauty here
Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna
4 posted 2002-12-12 05:23 AM


Tender write with a wide-awake ending--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

GOlDsparklESS
Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj
5 posted 2002-12-12 12:56 PM


Sweetness follows.. Ye are Gods.
Thou shall see when all is done.

wow~ profound!  as usual, i am utterly lost to try and decipher what inspires you

feels like a dream

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