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sea salty you
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sea salty you |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Enough time to sink a batallion of ships, This emptiness has waves, Yet they fail to drown me. Completing me with foreign harmony. Horizon sets a scene, There's future in the colour, Wether rising or setting, You'll be back here tomorrow. And in intoxicated ramblings, I set my truths out to the sea, A mystery to mankind, I know she keeps her secrets. Every groundbreaking thought, I tell you, Let you in on the fantasy reality ride. Listen to the lullaby hush of the waves upon the sand, When i knew i could not forget you, I put my ear to the sky, Welcoming the peaceful silence. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I like this... nicely done. Imagery and idea blended well... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is well put together, the beach theme lending itself to many moods |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
very well-written. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Soft, thoughtful, peaceful--enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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