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Elimeno P
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0 posted 2002-12-06 08:10 PM




~ Release ~
I trust your flow of wealth today
That all I couldn't but wanted to say
Will drip with steadfast apprenticeship
And offer comfort of peace my way.

Placidly gripping painter's quill,
Knowing relief is at your will,
Soon comes colorful craftsmanship
And my sanity does overfill.

Last stroke I lay upon the canvas
Is quiet, knowing I will miss
The strong, refuged fellowship
Given by paint in motion and bliss.

[This message has been edited by Elimeno P (12-06-2002 08:11 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Elimeno P - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-12-06 08:15 PM


Welcome to Passions....

an interesting read. I like the images used in this. Look forward to seeing more from you.


scorpio
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2 posted 2002-12-06 08:18 PM


believe in what your heart feels...

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-12-06 10:18 PM


Welcome to the family!!! I enjoyed your poem. Have a great time here, we are a true community of writers! Please check your email for a special message.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2002-12-06 10:32 PM


This is a great first post... Welcome!
vlraynes
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5 posted 2002-12-06 11:02 PM



Elimeno P~
This is a nicely penned first post.
I enjoyed reading it, and hope to see lots more.
Welcome to Passions.   
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Aenimal
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6 posted 2002-12-06 11:09 PM


Brilliant first post. All of us here know the healing power of the word. We welcome you with open arms, may your quill and words flow freely here at PIP.

raph  

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-12-06 11:13 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-12-06 11:52 PM


enjoyed...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2002-12-07 09:32 AM


WELCOME!
Enjoyed this write.

vandana
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10 posted 2002-12-07 09:33 AM


welcome tp passions enjoy your read
regards2you
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11 posted 2002-12-07 09:47 AM




LMNOP,

~Welcome to Passions~ Loved your first poem and I can relate to the title quite well and agree wholeheartedly..


Warm regards, Pat  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Nan
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12 posted 2002-12-07 10:12 AM


My daughter (when she was learning the alphabet) used to think that "Elimeno P" was all one letter...


I enjoyed this poem - It's a great entree to our Passionate world... You'll love it here - Settle in and enjoy.



ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2002-12-07 10:34 AM


Welcome to PIP!  

Great entrance. Look forward to reading you.
ThisDiamond

Krystopher Morris
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14 posted 2002-12-07 10:37 AM


Gives me a nice image of a straining painter.
Very beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.

Poetry is love and love is life.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
15 posted 2002-12-07 10:39 AM


Elimeno P
Welcome and well done, enjoyed.

Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2002-12-07 12:13 PM


A very nice first post to Passions and I enjoyed it very much.  Pleased to meet you. I hope you enjoy your time here reading and responding. Welcome.
Mistletoe Angel
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17 posted 2002-12-07 12:43 PM




(smiles) And you grace the canvas in this colorful and picturesque debut with such fervor and grace, sweet friend, let every line, every contour be revealed as you weave something like Van Gogh's "Starry Night", I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Elimeno, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elimeno, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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18 posted 2002-12-07 07:40 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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