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Amature2
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0 posted 2002-12-05 08:13 PM



Solitary Confinement


I'd put myself in solitary confinement

So that when I passed away

I wouldn't ruin anybody's day


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1 posted 2002-12-05 08:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I understand these feelings ever so well and hope all is alright! (sigh) Know your heart is born to wander free and we all love you so much, sweet friend, never let yourself hide in the shadows, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-12-06 04:38 PM


pretty hard on yourself here...

you captured the defeated and uncared for feeling well...


hope it gets better.

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3 posted 2002-12-06 06:34 PM


wow,
im speechless!

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4 posted 2002-12-09 06:57 AM


Much said in few words..but I've found that no matter how invisible one tries to be, someone always sees us, and it's not always a bad thing--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
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5 posted 2002-12-09 03:11 PM


I do that too, but for other reasons.
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6 posted 2002-12-09 03:16 PM


I liked reading that because you captured the essence of how i feel.I've been in a hospital with real solitary confinement.But that was long ago and now I like being alone,noone to annoy you ,or even make you mad.Is that wrong?
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7 posted 2002-12-09 03:46 PM


I feel lots and lots of hurt in this poem. I certainly hope that it's not about you.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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8 posted 2002-12-09 07:20 PM




But, on the other hand they must love you or it would not ruin their day!


Hope this is only a bad day for you.
I have family who couldn't care less.
Maybe you do, too.  They are really missing a lot, aren't they?

Try to develope friendships. We do that by being one, and as sensitive as you sound I'll bet you are a great one.

Warmest hugs to you, if this is about you. Hugs anyway, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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9 posted 2002-12-09 07:40 PM


Thank you all for your comments, and your concerns. Every thing is fine, in fact I have a very loving family, and also someone who cares for me alot. I may have sounded as if I didn't care, but the truth is I would just hate to ruin anybodies day if and when it happened. I would like to quote Pink Floyds "Great Gig in The Sky" from Dark Side of The Moon.

"And I am not frightened of dying,
any time will do, I don't mind.
Why should i be frightened of dying?
Theres no reason for it,
you've gotta go sometime"

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