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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-12-05 01:44 PM


As I think back
on this "Love" I've found
I think of how we must be
the most blessed pair around
I'm found him to have
a very good heart
Compassionate, kind, caring,
I could tell from the start
I knew all these qualities
that my "Love" has inside
He is so sweet and loving,
they're impossible to hide
I'm so thankful, too,
of himself, confident is he
If he wasn't sure of himself, may
never write, or read poetry to me
For some men I've known
through my past years
If poetry was mentioned,
they would have fears
Thinking they weren't masculine,
if this they would read
Their self-confidence gone,
realizing this, they need
For my "Love", I've found,
is very much masculine
If he desired to, for this,
he medals could win
He has all the good-looks,
to see on the outside,
but the most blessing to me,
is his heart on the inside


(I got this idea from a thread Balladeer posted in the "pipTalk Lounge", about people not reading poetry nowadays)

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-05-2002 01:56 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-05 01:49 PM


Ahh Ethel, what a beautiful tribute to your Gary!
I couldn't see the entire title here..
but I think it has something to do with Balladeer?
~Hugs~

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2 posted 2002-12-05 01:50 PM


Oops!  Just came back to let you know that I understand now...you have it down at the bottom of the post.  
Thank you!

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3 posted 2002-12-05 01:54 PM


Hey Nancy Lee...
I typed it in behind the title, but all of it didn't show up,
so I put it at the bottom of the poem. Sorry for the mix up.
I fixed it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-05-2002 01:57 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-12-05 09:45 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so sad but true, sweet friend, poetry is so avoided nowadays, for the government expects us to rely on the media and what we need are more poets as to create is also to establish new hope and hope to end the problems we all face with love! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-12-06 11:07 AM


Hi Garysgirl - what a sweet and loving poem this is! A wonderful dedication!

Cor

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6 posted 2002-12-06 11:42 AM


I believe the emotional commitment is already there....and with that accomplished the other seems to always find a way.
nice write!


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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