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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2002-12-03 05:31 PM



Are you looking up
Into the same night sky
& hoping I'm thinking of you

On a sunny day
Do you sometimes pray
That what you're feeling
I'm feeling it too?

Alone or in a crowd
Are you incomplete somehow
Longing to be with me?

'cause I love you...

Do you feel exposed
From your head to your toes
When we're standing face to face?

Do you think I'd know
How bad it would hurt you so
If someone were to take your place?

But shouldn't you know better?
If it were up to me
We'd never, ever part

'cause I love you....

True,
As true as love could be
I need you,
I hope that you need me
I know where love begins
& you are my friend
So look deep in your heart
you might see,

that you love me
too...


Sunkissed

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RSWells
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1 posted 2002-12-03 05:34 PM


And well he should.....and should voice it. Welcome
Toerag
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2 posted 2002-12-03 05:38 PM


Great first post....welcome to passions...and the next time I look up into the night's heavens..I'll think of you...
Cathie Arnold
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3 posted 2002-12-03 05:47 PM


This is a very nice poem, from beginning to end.
Magnus
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4 posted 2002-12-03 05:53 PM


I have a suspicion that he knows this...and
if he does not....I am sure that this poem
will tell him what's happenin'!!!

Welcome to Passions...enjoy yourself...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-12-03 05:58 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
And a very nice entrance you have made here today!
I look forward to more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-12-03 06:05 PM



Ah, A sun-sister...Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a very Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-12-03 06:25 PM


Well said...James
WinterWren
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8 posted 2002-12-03 06:31 PM


Wow there wasn't a single line in there I didn't like, you are a very good writer. I'll be looking for more of yours.

WinterWren
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Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2002-12-03 07:09 PM


Welcome to Passions.  Very nice first post.  Enjoy your time here and get to know us as we grow to know you.  
Sandpiper
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10 posted 2002-12-03 07:23 PM


Honest and from the heart, lovely--welcome.
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11 posted 2002-12-03 07:55 PM


Welcome to Passions! Lovely first post. Enjoy yourself here. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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12 posted 2002-12-03 08:21 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous heartfelt debut, sweet friend, may this friendship in your golden heart blossom and be filled with the most happiest love of all! God Bless You, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunkissed, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunkissed
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13 posted 2002-12-04 03:45 PM


Thanks all for the warm welcome. I hope to read as many of you as I can in the near future.


Sunkissed

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