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quik
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0 posted 2002-12-03 11:05 AM


        


See the things that I do for you is not just for fun
I try to do it as right as possible but you keep me on the run
I’m doing my best not to get you mad
Because I could be the bestest boyfriend you ever had
I’m trying to get to you but things never work out right
I try hard but things alwayz resort into a fight
You don’t understand what I’m going through to get to you
I don’t really don’t know what I’m going to do
The things I do are suppose to work things out but it wont
You know you do some of the things and don’t say you don’t
Because there is so many things I can do and then I’ll just fall
Making your sweet voice lift me up with a simple phone call
Will make me feel like a new me that can do so many things
On top of that I could also buy you a diamond ring
But you still don’t understand what’s going on
Because you still do the same things wrong
And I can’t just sit here and take it no more
Even though you’re the girl I do adore
Makes me cry even more
No matter what I do for you nothing will make it right
Because all we do is sit here and fight
So nothing will ever be right for the both of us
Because we cant go through with all this fuss
I’ll just sit here and think about what’s going to happen…


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-03 11:20 AM


Say goodbye and good luck.
As hard as it may seem, it's the only viable option.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-12-03 11:29 AM


Love shouldn't hurt, altho' it often does. Perhaps by thinking more with one's head rather than just reacting to our emotions, we get a clearer picture of the situation.

~ Sending you lots of loving and healing energy

Earth Angel

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-03 12:13 PM


Antonio, I could feel the hurt in you through this one.
I hope it's not about the other girl you wrote about.
If it is, maybe you should just find somone else, before you
get more involved with her. Love isn't suppose to hurt, friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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4 posted 2002-12-03 12:39 PM


quik, love is the most beautiful thing on earth, but as the rest allready said: it isn't supposed to hurt.
After love grew in your heart for this girl, u could only hope she'd return the love.. sadly in this case u'll have to let go, there will be others u'll love, and they will return the love u feel

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

WinterWren
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5 posted 2002-12-03 03:43 PM


There comes a point when you have done everything you possibly could to keep a relationship going, and if it still isn't working right after that, this is the point where you say goodbye. Good expressions in your poem. Keep it up!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

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