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Kristine
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since 2002-10-30
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Mahal Kita!!!

0 posted 2002-12-03 06:47 AM




I cannot keep myself in disguise
The moment I looked in your eyes
I knew it's love I felt inside
A feeling that I cannot hide

Your stare lifts me into the sky
Your smile melts me and that is not a lie.
Your passionate love that I always desire
Whenever you're near me, It seems I'll die

I notice that in everything I do
You never had an eye for me or two
My heart feels very blue
But it doesn't matter as long as I love you.

My fantasies of being with you
Moments I've waited, caressing you
These will never come into reality I know
So goodbye to my illusion, I better let go.






Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

[This message has been edited by Kristine (12-03-2002 06:55 AM).]

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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2002-12-03 09:08 AM


Yea, go ahead and let go
You'd be better off
With a guy named Toe

cute write...cute girl..

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2002-12-03 10:14 AM


Poof! There goes another illusion. Good write, Kristine. Sometimes illusions are more fun than the 3D reality.
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