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vandana
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0 posted 2002-12-01 10:13 AM


So much
So much
In this world
So much
I can't Imange
I just can't believe
you would give me
So much love
The love so much
And There Is so much
In this world
I count every minute
Every hour
When there Is so much
going on
Where there Is so much
to believe
Where there Is so much
To hide love away
When time Is our side
There Is so much to say
There Is so much
To give away
There Is so much
to lightened a day away
There Is so much
to feel the pain
There Is so much
To give away
When the day Is here to stay
So much to say.......

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1 posted 2002-12-01 10:59 AM



Vandana, you are so right...
there can be so much love,
it's ours if we simply look...

Thank you!

whiskey
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2 posted 2002-12-01 11:31 AM


Love can be great if you find the right one
Wonderful poem thanks for sharing it

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3 posted 2002-12-01 11:40 AM


vandana
Well done, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2002-12-01 08:25 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is so very precious and so very true, sweet friend, and I wish nothing but true comfort to always sing in your heart and for all you want to say to sing out like a bluebird of love! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, your heart is so deserving of eternal happiness, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
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5 posted 2002-12-02 01:07 AM


The motion in this poem is so great that it makes me believe 'so much' in all things good. Thank you.

etoodog

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6 posted 2002-12-02 01:12 AM


That poem just really says alot. Thank you for writing it.

WinterWren
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7 posted 2002-12-02 05:19 AM


just beautiful!
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