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Open Poetry #23

Our Obituary (obtuse)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-11-30 12:45 PM

Overlooking
our obsequiousness
obstructs
open observation.

Obtuseness obliterates
objectivity.

Obstinate obstreperous officials
obfuscate,
offer opiates
openly.

Sit up and
stand down.

Euphemisms clarified:
cease and desist, for
potential collateral damage
in the theatre
writes
our obituary.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-30-2002 01:11 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-11-30 01:40 PM

Obtuseness obliterates objectivity

Great lines but the one above is my favourite. How very true and how very sad that too many suffer from this obtuseness you speak of.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-11-30 02:47 PM

Midnitesun
Interesting read.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2002-11-30 02:51 PM

Aenimal, thank you for taking time to read and comment. That is my favorite line too.

Sy, thank you for reading and commenting.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2002-11-30 03:30 PM

Ornery orifices
often orate
outspoken
objections of
others

Only omniscient
ones overcome
obvious oversights

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-30 06:59 PM

(smiles) Wow!!! Oh my gosh, I love the alliteration in this, sweet friend, this is excellent, why be so obtuse when you can save so much time and space? This is marvelous, sweet friend, remain acute, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-11-30 07:26 PM

Mark, LOL. I knew you'd O me.

Noah, glad you enjoyed all the o
'lliterative fun.

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