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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-11-29 08:13 PM

I reach constantly to you,
awkwardly with yourself.
Can't imagine whats going on in your head,
but if helping you means finding out,
I'll do my best.

You seem angered with my harmony.
but I love you all the same,
trying to understand,
your circling game.

Self hatred with a passion,
your beauty you disregard.
sensitive soul,
you're worth an infinity of them
they bring you down,

Let them go.

Misguided fools,
playing with golden heart.
I read your face,
you deny the pain,
I've seen it before,
and I'll see it again.

Not before I cradle you with my thoughts,
and show you I'm here,
I've known puzzles of self,
and I've put some together.

I'll show you them,
we'll get through this together.

for you, in your difficult time, you know i love you as family, such a giving, sensitive young woman.
the laughter you bring, can wash away my fears ,you lighten my load, don't lock me out, let me lighten yours. love u.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (11-29-2002 08:16 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-11-29 08:18 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a golden heart filled with so much compassion and I know she and so many others will always be touched by your love as we are! (sigh) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-11-29 11:44 PM

Very nice...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-29 11:52 PM

gemma, this poem really has a lot of feelings
and emotion in it. I really enjoyed it.
Thanks so much for sharing your feelings with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

She
Junior Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 41
Wishing On A Northern Star

4 posted 2002-11-30 12:02 PM

This has a nice message. Trying to make someone realize what to love about themselves is difficult. I love the way you say it here.

Jamie Dawg
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 35

5 posted 2002-11-30 01:05 PM

this is very interesting....having just commented on the innocence of your other lovely poem this one really paints a narrator who is wise beyond their years. Well expressed and one of those poems to help you get through a tough day.

I'd like to say I am gaining a wonderful impression from the poetry of yours I am reading. I would like to congratulate another Uk poet! lol!

Respect JD xx

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-11-30 01:22 PM

"I've known puzzles of self,
and I've put some together"

Very good line!

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