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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-24 01:38 PM


Lines Written


when earth
began to write itself
time passed
through air
and wind was
water kissed land
and shore appeared
fire sprang
from sparked dirt
and we
were the authors
of each other
when earth
began to write itself

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-24 04:19 PM



Helen!  Very good!  Wouldn't it have been nice, in a way, to come up with the very first Idea?  Ah, we are consigned to continue re-writing what was before, and should remember to enjoy the efforts just the same.  

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2 posted 2002-11-24 07:07 PM




(smiles) And the stars published the lovely words you wrote to each other to forever be cherished dear! (kiss on cheek) You can always create such magic and origin with your words, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-25 11:02 PM


Nice!
Thanks for sharing!
God bless!

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2002-11-25 11:45 PM


...I wonder what Earth must have been like before concrete, smog, car-alarms, Jerry Springer, and George Dubbyah...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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