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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-10-15 09:21 PM


You try to sleep
But something keeps
You awake
Something haunts you
You pull the covers
Over your head
As the figure
Draws near
You try to scream
But nothing comes out
Nobody can help you
As the figure looms over you
And everything goes dark

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-10-15 09:31 PM


This is why you can't sleep!!!!!
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-15 09:33 PM


Thank you Magnus!!! Yes I have had nightmares like this. Quite scary I say.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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3 posted 2002-10-15 10:21 PM


I haven't.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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4 posted 2002-10-16 01:28 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I have had these nightmares so many times as a little boy, just thinking of the past brings tears to my eyes and depresses me so I'll stop here! (sad sigh) This is powerfully striking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-10-16 01:57 PM


This too, has happened to me on many a dark and dreary night. The dark and malevolent figure was a creature from the dark side---a succubus that wanted the fresh flesh of an earth angel. I can't go on! These ghastly memories are tearing my fragile self assunder.

Boooooo! Did I getcha back for scaring me!tehe

EA


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6 posted 2002-10-17 05:20 PM


Sounds like you need to change rooms. LOL

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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7 posted 2002-10-17 06:30 PM


Very interesting. Perhaps there are more to these night terrors than some would suspect...

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

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