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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-24 02:57 AM



Repeat


the way
you leave
my bed
in sweat
echoes
in light
the way
you say
my name

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2002-11-24 03:25 AM


damn! that's good!
Kethry
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2 posted 2002-11-24 06:16 AM


Wow! worth repeating? Oh Yes!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sandpiper
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3 posted 2002-11-24 06:57 AM


Ah yes, could feel those echoes forever--enjoyed!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

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4 posted 2002-11-24 07:17 PM




(sigh) Oh Helen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! Such soft sensuality is always spoken from your golden heart, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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