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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-11-21 11:38 AM


A brighter smile
will  never  be made
than that of one
born from        precious memories.

He whispered         "remember"
and I did.......

The smile outside
glowed
from the warmth felt
within~   the memories~

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you  'hear'  "me"?

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1 posted 2002-11-21 11:40 AM



"remember" can be
such a delightful word

extracting smiles
is one of its qualities...

moonflower
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2 posted 2002-11-21 11:44 AM


this is beautiful..gentle and sweet..like a favorite well-loved memory..

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

passing shadows
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3 posted 2002-11-21 12:34 PM


yeah...usually it happens in stopped traffic, and makes people look at you funny
Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-11-21 12:43 PM


Oh Yes Donna!
Love this....and the 'remembers' are what make love magic!
Well done!
~Hugs to you sweet poetess~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-11-21 01:08 PM


Gentle Spirit
Well done enjoyed the read.

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6 posted 2002-11-21 01:20 PM


Another lovely gift of words from you Donna. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-11-22 04:31 AM


Like this....James
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8 posted 2002-11-22 04:58 AM


Donna~ Such a simple word that makes so many people smile. Enjoyed...Paul
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9 posted 2002-11-22 03:27 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may loves sweet memories always fill your heart and bring a hearth, an afterglow of fire to your smile! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-11-22 04:12 PM


nice
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12 posted 2002-12-14 04:51 PM


Your smile just brought my own.  Thank you, Donna.  

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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13 posted 2002-12-14 05:13 PM


Oh yes, Donna... good memories do bring smiles, don't they?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-12-14 05:46 PM


The smile outside
glowed
from the warmth felt
within~   the memories~

I feel this warmth too, Donna...
thanks for sharimg it with us.
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
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15 posted 2002-12-16 04:02 AM


I'm sorry for running this to death, but I just LOVE the beginning of this!
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16 posted 2002-12-16 05:53 AM


Thank you everyone.  Aw Dixie, bless your heart hon.  Hugs.
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