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Silhouette Touch
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Silhouette Touch |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Silhouette Touch Moon was palmed in the bend of trees caught the glow of fire in eyes. Watched it ascend, then fall with ease driving thoughts of you in its rise. Wondering where you were at this moment in time, could you sense the excitement in me? I stilled these thoughts as the traffic aligned, the fullness of moon to see. I paced my drive, kept mapping it out to catch it again, in its sphere. As the darkness took over the daylight time, I waited for its reappear. This meaning is special to those of us who are born in the sign of its glow. Captured by more than the fullness of view are "the hidden" that you and I know. I reach to foreshadow, to silhouette touch of its beauty, a comforting sight. You were there, I could feel it, until its descent sharing my thoughts in the night. MM "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well painted... I enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely, lovely...and those 1st two lines pulls the reader in just as the moon's glow on a night such as you've described...most assuredly!  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
C and Virginia, I've been doing some traveling each morning at sunrise and each evening at sunset and to see the full moon cradled over the horizon each way is quite beautiful. There are some moments when it seems so large and glowing while on the drive home each evening. It really catches your eyes and your breath. *s M |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
nakdthoughts~ A beautiful poem that painted images just as beautiful. Enjoyed...Paul |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Very Nice *S* J |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I could "see" the picture as I read your words....beautiful. "Love makes the world go around" |
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