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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-11-20 10:26 PM


I have played in the darkness of shadow before
away from the light, behind the closed door.
Alone, and consumed with the deep of the black,
I was slipping away with no way to come back.

I found there was comfort in the absence of light,
my depression kept hidden and out of the bright.
No pain did I feel while I was cushioned within,
I couldn't see the prison that I was trapped in.

The shadow, my friend, the cloak from the real
engrossed in the darkness, no longer to feel.
I rode the dark waves of the deepest despair
captured, yet longing for escape to somewhere.

In a fit of rebellion against the dark rage,
one day I decided to break free of the cage.
I let my heart shine, just blast from my chest
a light, ablaze, with the strength to attest.

That playing forever in the dark of shadow
leaves the spirit bereft, void and hollow.

WhiteRose 11/20/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2002-11-20 10:28 PM


Quite simply brilliant and inspiring to those trapped in the darkness. Thank you for sharing.
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2002-11-20 10:44 PM




yes, for those locked in darkness, an opening
always is there, isnt it........peace to you

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2002-11-21 02:49 AM


yes, there is comfort in darkness, and I know it well... hugs
Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna
4 posted 2002-11-21 05:06 AM


There is comfort, and then the rapture of stepping into the light--enjoyed the insight!

"I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret."
Jelaluddin Rumi

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