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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-11-20 09:22 AM

Doubt

There is doubt in that mirror
from words not received.
There is silence in darkness
that weighs come each eve.

I harbor the shades
of the rainbow's goodbye.
Anguished at times,
tears silently cry.

If you look rather closely
the eyes give away.
They stare into space
contemplating each day.

It's a game, all this waiting,
my dreams shattered more.
Your words have lost meaning,
as they have once before.

There is doubt in that mirror,
a break in the feel.
A day long in waiting,
the silence of real.

I miss what is gone,
the smiles of a face
that could chain me in spirit
and tie me in place,

To be held in a trust,
to bridge what is pure,
to cross over time
and be lonely no more.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-11-20 09:25 AM

mirrors are put in frames it seems so that we might capture reflections and turn them into portraits...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-11-20 09:37 AM

Oh, Maureen, such emotion and feeling you can write.
Thanks for sharing your heart, sweet lady.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-11-20 09:55 AM

A time of loneliness can also be a time for "reflection". A place where we can get an overview of where we've been, where we are, and where it is that we want to go.

You have such a talent for bringing the reader into your world.

Linda

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-11-20 10:02 AM

So true....and this is why I am my best friend.....said smiling.....

I enjoy your poetry much.

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-11-20 11:38 AM

I've had enough reflection for awhile...
thank you all

M

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