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Indecision |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I'm squashed by indecision Loaded down by care If there's a firm position You won't find me there Fence sitting is my practice I dither to and fro In saturate of fractious I come after I go I waver with a quaver My vote is one to share If there's a closer shaver My vote will not be there I'm clouded by confusion First its yes and then it's no You'll give me contusions If it continues to be so Now I quaver when I waver For two minded I won't be With the passion of a raver Single focus sets me free Or maybe not... Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Join me for "waffles" poetess Keth?  (love the wit of your rhymes)  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
JM, waffles it is, I've always been told I can waffle on, now you know why.  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Excellent writing, Keth... You certainly don't waffle as you weave your words... I thought this to be very creative, indeed  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...I feel that way just before an election...very cute Kethry, very cute... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lyra, what is a weave - but an in and out waffle with sytle. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, funny I always feel that way after an election. You know if I'd done this...lol. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Witty! Clever! Enjoyable! --and well-written to boot--or not to boot--that is the question--or is it? I don't know, yes I do! It is! But then again...tehe Guess I can identify with this poem...well, maybe some of the time... EA |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) This thought goes through my head when I decide what I want for lunch, and I have the song "Did you ever have to make up your mind?" in my head on and on! (giggles) This is so cute, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like it! (or I don't) I'll read it again! (or won't) I'll make up my mind (or not) Your words leave me cold (or hot) I'll make up my mind (I think) As soon as I have A drink You really are great! (I guess) I want to see more! (or less) LOL! No, koala kid, there's no indeciviness about your wit...this poem proves it  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, this is a really good poem....... cute and delightful, too. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, I do love this, Keth! LOL I just wish I didn't recognize my wishy-washiness in every line! LOL Well written and lots of fun!!! *S* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
do I comment or don't I/ I could... but then again what if I say the wrong thing? If I don't,.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I just had to pop in again after reading BALLADEER'S perfectly wonderful and witty comeback poem!-- well at least some of it is, no, I guess all of it is...then again...you be the judge, actually I'll be the judge--hey, I've got it!--No I don't--Yes I do!---Let's all judge him! hehe EA |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I used to be indecisive, but now i'm not so sure! very clever kethry, i love your style! lots of love ,gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Can't say it beter then balladeer. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved one, okay I’m biased, but I did not coerce or make any of these readers give you rave reviews. You got them because you deserve them, witty and with style darling heart. You know this is utterly wonderful and I love it totally. Loved ‘Deer’s response too. This is one of your special ones the smile on my face is broad darling heart  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm with ya! |
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