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Grays of Privacy
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Grays of Privacy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Grays of Privacy Deep in pools of legacy I see my minds expectancy. I see the blind that lap the shore Looking for forevermore. I see the pull on sandy beach I see the full of every leach. I see the agony of loss I see the gain of time of course. All those loops of infinites eight Adding more and more of freight Skates upon my face of shine Etching me another line. And when I see the mirrors kiss It hisses me a dark abyss That makes me turn away in awe And sets a raven at my door. I never was too fond this bird He slurs my bond and burrs my word. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual Sy...good stuff with a lot to think about inside... I enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, I think the raven is meant to be a deceiver to all and a tragic character that can haunt us so much, sweet friend, you speak of such a truth here, I love it, always think butterflies and hummingbirds, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sahring!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mirror Mirror on the wall ... who is the wisest poet of all. Who is the last word of wisdom rhyme, whose verse is etched in infinities time. Who is the sage that is all the rage, Who sets the stage when he pens the page. To whom do we turn for humilities yearn ... the questions that burn of humanities learn. Who teaches us we must not be afraid to fly, I'd like to try to write his name 'cross the sky. Mirror Mirror ... tell my Sy-babes true ... tell him age is just wisdom's accrue. Mirror Mirror ... tell him age is like his rhyme ... like a fine wine ... he just keeps getting better with time.  *winkiewinkie*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair Thanks for the good stuff. Noah Thank you my friend always enjoy your replies. JM, Dear winkiewinkie twinky, you make my Randy a happy stinky. He flies around my head in call, shouting I am the best of them all. He's now strapped on his double saddle and calling me to skedaddle. That means we'll be there post haste. You bring the tea I'll bring the taste. WW |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now with this you transported me back some 40 years to Dr. Gillespie's infinity sigh...Oh, I mean sign, of course....  Here's looking at you, Kid! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good morning and thank you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Grays of Privacy?...That's why I wear a hat.....good write Mr. Tabin.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
haaa...now just where is that forevermore I have been searching for it M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Skates upon my face of shine Etching me another line Why Seymour, don't you know that those are just "laugh" lines? Thankyou for yet another wonderful morning read. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, yet another delightful read this morning. I so look forward to your words every day. Thanks so much for being you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Can I just ditto JM??? *G* For I love her response... especially the closing couplet. *S* And I love this poem, Seymour... but we've got to find you a kinder mirror. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toerag, I got to get one of those hats. Maureen, Why it's right behind the door. LOL Chris, You are kind. garysgirl And thank you for being you. suthern, Do you know where I an get a better mirror? LOL Thank you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
All those loops of infinites eight Adding more and more of freight Skates upon my face of shine Etching me another line. This is a wonderful poem, Sy... It is a privilege to grow old  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, It is a privilege to have you comment. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart truly one of your utter best, I love the vision this brings to mind Within times mirror what do I see? A pattern of wisdom’s clarity It reflects your eyes reasoned thought Of all the ways of truth you’ve sought And maybe it places a mist o’re you With a little line or perhaps two They are just ripples nothing more Wrinkles of what has gone before Time’s passage leaves much in its wake But I’m thankful for truth’s sake For the wisdom time has given you You sprinkle us with its dew This lines drawn with time’s own hand Leave a map of knowledge in hope’s sand Absolutely perfect writing I love it, you never fail to write exquitely and this is truly excellent I love it utterly utterly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Keep ravin', Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha Thank you for the beautiful write. Got your email and you have my prayers |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I love your style, your words always so alive, such a talented fellow, much love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer Funny, funny bright and sunny. gemjop Thank you so much, aim to please. |
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