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Quiet Confessions |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
the sky is opening in front of my eyes disolving my protective guise the sun pours in, illuminating all naked and scared, I fall cowering, shuddering on the grass trying hard not to remember the past lost and scared, illusions shattered haunting memories, did not think they mattered defenseless on the ground, for all to see my life, the quintessential pathetic fallacy here I am, broken down and shorn bare feelings secret, mayhaps time to share Hrm..well after 5 months of not being here.. I'm returned. I hope you enjoy  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
More than glad to welcome you home, Kellinjar... and on a poem worthy of you, as always! |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
sad, reaching, and hopeful..all at the same time. I enjoyed this. Welcome back from wherever you have been. Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Enjoyed! God Bless! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perhaps it is time to share.... nice piece... I enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, this is certainly the place to share and to have others listen. You portrayed the baring of your body and soul so effectively, that I'm feeling naked as I sit here writing this reply! I find myself wanting to cover myself up! Now that is what I call effective writing! EA |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
Well Thank you, I think that's the highest bit of praise I've ever gotten for my writing |
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