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The Other Half
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“THE OTHER HALF” by Bill Charles ~~~~ A longing heart searches far and wide, perhaps in your writings I belong beside, for they seem to be somewhere within, I believe they want me to again begin… Comfort me, guide me to your place, drag me there with your loving grace, ever will the skies speak of peace, brought on the warm breezes to seek… Rest me upon your soft bosom fair, again I will find within to be aware, the years which have passed on me by, are shadows fade, as they say goodbye… Yet words I cannot find to say to one, where we passed, yet now abandon, I would say to you how deep I feel, your dreams come to me, I kneel… Then one tear, as it falls to the ground, fear slowly released or I would drown, this heart has held a secret dear, I ask to bring it out, for it to appear… Cool is the breeze to touch my face, if known I would follow you anyplace, my thoughts, desires felt deeply inside, whispers heard, as I wish to confide… As before, not yet known of a mask, if I knew the words that I may ask, trials, tribulations that led me here, a vow to give, from one very dear… Blessed kiss of lips not yet known, in my shadows deep, I wait alone… ~~~~ This was written from being inspired by Lady In White's poem 'Half A Song'. Thank you Lady for your most inspiring and beautiful words... BC [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (11-18-2002 08:10 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The entire poem is very well written, says much of this man, the poet that pours his life into these words.... Thanx BC... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, I love the way you pour your heart and feelings onto these pages of blue. You are a very talented writer, Sir. Thanks so much for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC I have read alot of your writings, and this by far is one of your best. Your words are beautiful and inspiring and flow like magic across the page. Nice work and I hope you get "inspired" more often! You have a fine pen Sir! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Bill!! And Lady in White is truly an inspiration! She will love this I am sure. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC -- this is truly beautiful and has brought tears to my eyes. You are so much the romantic; every woman's dream! Huggles, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill You were dearly inspired...this is beautiful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (claps with appluase) Oh Bill, this is so beautifully inspiring yet so sad, sweet friend, I wish for this true happiness to come to your heart and for the other half to connect to your heart! (big hugggssssss) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, Lady In White is a fabulous poet just like you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Truly lovely, Bill  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's good! I like that a lot! gives me hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only are you a poet, you have the soul of one as well... EA |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is beautiful and power-packed with emotion. You are so deeply in tune with feelings of the heart...each of your poems speaks volumes about the love that dwells inside of you. Great poem, indeed!!!! **Ivy Rose |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bill~ This is a very beautiful write...wonderfully inspired. I enjoyed this. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-21-2002 06:13 PM).] |
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