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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-16 06:25 AM

Bursting My Bubble

it floated
in front of me
clear free
transparency
raising to levels
of sparkling heights
finally exploding
in drawing splash
washing me
in color

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-11-16 07:24 AM

Helen, I loved this one, as well as all the other ones of yours I've read (~~smiles~~).
Again, Lady, I thank ou for sharing your wonderful poetry with us. It's beautiful.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

2 posted 2002-11-16 01:34 PM

Nice!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-11-16 02:03 PM

Helen,
That happens sometimes, enjoyed.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-11-16 02:12 PM

Helen, I loved this. Brillliant writing and the last line, 'washing me in color..' is GREAT.

Great job ... Huggles, Marti

"I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP."
Louisa May Alcott

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-16 04:36 PM

(smiles) Yay, now that's what I call laundry service! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, may the colors of life always shine upon your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-11-16 04:38 PM

nice *s...to be washed in color, I can picture that

M

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-11-16 04:39 PM

Helen, you painted the bursting bubble
well! Like it!

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

8 posted 2002-11-16 04:40 PM

cleare fantasy to colored reality. nice.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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