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~K
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since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

0 posted 2002-11-15 10:52 PM

slipping through the window
of a cool nights mystery
the substance of shadows made real
by desire or necessity
To rake the wind
with anothers thoughts
was to find power where
there had been none.

~K

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-11-15 11:18 PM

To rake the wind
with anothers thought...

now this is a precious line...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2002-11-15 11:25 PM

Well done.
Maybe I need to go rake some wind, and leave the leaves alone to fall where they May.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-15 11:27 PM

~K~....this is really a good poem. A lot of truth is a few words. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2002-11-16 12:01 PM

i like what there is here to ponder yuh

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-11-16 12:29 PM

~K, this reminds me of something Ayn'ish....for some reason... maybe a bedroom scene? can't remember which book, or even character's name...my biggest regret is getting rid of all those books. Darn!

By the way like this a lot...

Warm Regards, Pat...

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-16 12:33 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I used to be so depressed because no one ever wanted to alk to me and I was alone, now that I have found my Joanna thoughts of her always make me smile! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

7 posted 2002-11-16 12:37 PM

Thanks everybody!!! My original intention with this poem was sort of an ode to the imaginary friend I had in childhood ~ now it also reminds me of the connections made on-line with wonderful people like yourselves!

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

8 posted 2002-11-17 03:09 AM

and this happens to be the equvelency of my
doors and the wind

the wind blows so
as that when the doors are slamed the door as been looked from the inside out,

and kindly these things will happen

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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