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0 posted 2002-10-15 01:30 AM


I   SEE   YOU   MY   LOVE


I see you, my Love
in the stars in the sky
For I see them every time
I gaze into your eyes


I see you, my Love
in the beautiful sunset
Bringing back memories of
when we first met


I see you, my Love
In the white sandy beach
Where for each other we
did so often reach


I see you, my Love
in pages of poetry I read
Where poets seem to know
about our every need


I see you, my love
when couples walk hand in hand
Especially like when we walked
in the sand


I see you, my Love
when I look at the moon
And I think of how I will
see you very soon


I see you my Love
when a cool summer breeze I feel
And think of how our love is so
very, very real


I see you my Love
when I see the mist of rain
For the tears I shed missing you
causes so much pain


I see you my Love
when I see the colors of the rainbows
And think of all the many colors
that our love shows


I see you my Love
in everything,you see
Because, my dear sweet love
EVERYTHING  you are to me!!








[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-15-2002 10:22 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-15 02:37 AM


I see you my Love
in everything, you see

Exactly.

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2 posted 2002-10-15 03:05 AM


Duncan, thanks for reading my poem. I appreciate it and your comments.


With Love To All,
Ethel/garysgirl

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3 posted 2002-10-15 10:17 AM


This is beautiful. So filled with love. Enjoyed the delightful read this morning.
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4 posted 2002-10-15 10:21 AM


Thanks so much, Anne (sweet Rose), for your sweet reply.


Love To All,
Ethel



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5 posted 2002-10-15 10:26 AM


Well Ethel, this is beautiful, you expressed your love so well, all the way through.... left me with a good feeling; ~been there, done that~
pleasant memories of my own brought forth.  Cool!

Warmly,
Pat

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6 posted 2002-10-15 10:38 AM


Now that is a "Love" poem!

Linda

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7 posted 2002-10-15 10:39 AM


Thanks so much, Pat, for your warm reply. I'm glad that it brought back memories.


Love to All,
Ethel

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8 posted 2002-10-15 10:41 AM


Thanks so very much, sweet Linda.


Love to All,
Ethel

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9 posted 2002-10-15 10:43 AM


garysgirl
This is a wonderful write and so true.

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10 posted 2002-10-15 11:15 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye because I know this feeling ever so much when I dream of my Joanna and it seems now even smellinh a flower or seeing a smile on a little girls face always reminds me of the beautiful young woman she is! (kiss on cheek) May true loves happiness always fill your heart and may you see him in all thats beautiful, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-10-15 11:26 AM


Thanks, Mr Seymour, for taking the time to stop and for leaving a sweet reply. I appreciate you so much.

Noah, thank you , too, for stopping and leaving a reply. You say such sweet, loving words. I'm so glad that you have your sweet Joanna to give you such sweet inspiration.

With Love To All,
Ethel

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