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The Essence Of Within
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The Essence Of Within |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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~The Essence Of Within~ Raining of soft sounds enveloping my spirit. Tranquility reigns.~ Breathing in serene calm prevails within my soul. Lifes peaceful moments.~ Held in hushing thoughts softly breathing harmony. The essence of within.~ If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-11-2002 10:15 AM).] |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
weeee. this poem make me happy. nice job! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, these speak so well of the "Essence Within" you! Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A place I return to often Donna...nicely expressed. ThisDiamond |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I love your poem, but I hate the temptation they evoke in me to write of kicking kitties. lol Very sweet thoughts, Spirit. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do like the "held in hushing"...that is very nice! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah yes...very gentle...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Held in hushing thoughts softly breathing harmony. The essence of within.~ ============================== This one is my favourite... but I love them all Donna. Beautifully done. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your beautiful words always show the true essence within your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - peacefulness inside is a great feeling. You must feel it... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is very nice. By the time I read it the third time I found my breathing had slowed down, I was inhaling deeply and felt so at peace. Mmmmmmm. Now I have to go take a nap before bedtime... In other words this is terrific! I might print this out and read it every hour on the hour... As far as constructive critisism, this happens to be quite perfect the way it is. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Donna you are as soft as sand rippled as time unfurls her feathers you are as tranquil as falling water making its own way - smoothing a ragged edge jeff [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (10-11-2002 11:23 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~ Wonderful. Soothing thoughts found within your soul you have written about here...Paul |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Oh so calming...the more times I read this poem, the more serene I feel...Donna, your selection of words and phrasing are excellent in this write... ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"Held in hushing thoughts" Such pretty images this brings to mind. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Clumsy, thank you and welcome to Passions. Linda thanks hon. Hugs. TD it is a nice place to return to. Thank you. Long John, oh no...please don't kick the kitties! Thank you kindly sir.Thanks Karilea, I was writing at lunch again and the words just seemed to fit. HUGS. Thank you James, I appreciate your taking the time to read. Nancy, I believe that is my favorite too. Thanks hon. Hugs. Noah, that is so sweet, I thank you friend. Ah Bill, sometimes I feel it and other times well......we all have those days. Thank you. Pat what a lovely compliment. Thank you so very much. Jeff, what a lovely poetic reply. I do thank you dearly. Paul thank you and I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Scorpio I thank you for those very kind words. Welcome to Passions. Michael I am glad that you saw the pretty images, thank you Charisma, Thank you! Hugs! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Donna, this is so calming, soothing and gentle. Makes me want to crawl up on the couch with my puff and have a hot cup of tea. Beautifully written ... Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marti, today was a good day here for curling up with a cup of hot tea. It was damp and cool. Thanks for stopping in and reading my words. Hugs. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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